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Friday, May 27, 2011

Wind Voices, for Poetry Friday

Happy Poetry Friday!

Some years ago I published a book of poems called Water Voices. It was a collection of riddles (originally titled Water Riddles) with beautiful watercolors by Julie Downing. Each poem, or riddle, ended with the words, "Who am I?" When you turned the page, you found the answers: Morningmist, Sprinklerspray, Oceanwave, Bedtime Bath, and the like. Each riddle was spoken by one of the many, varied voices water might have.

Here's one, to give you an idea how it works:

When you wake to the banjo strumming of frogs
and the lake is a silky soup
where turtles dive from island-logs
and herons glide and dragonflies skate
and faraway ripples from distant oars
make their slow voyage out,
I trail my white net over the lake
and wait for sunrise.

Who am I?

[turn the page]

I am Morningmist -
doing a disappearing trick.

Originally the collection was meant to be one of a quartet of books about the elements, with Earth Voices, Wind Voices, and Fire Voices to follow. My publisher did not want to commit to all four, so they published the first one and said we'd see how well it sold.

Well, it did okay, but not well enough for the publisher to take a chance and publish the other three. Eventually, even with a recommendation from the Bulletin of the Center for Children's Books and other good reviews, Water Voices went from the warehouse to the jobber's.

I had already written Wind Voices and sketched out poems for the other two in the series. I still hold onto the hope that all four books might be in print someday, somewhere, somehow. I thought I'd offer a wind poem here for Poetry Friday. It's a bit out of season.

After leafdown, after appledrop,
when tiger clouds go prowling
and trees send long-distance messages to a sad and moanly tune,
when shadows hurry
and the red sun sinks
and pumpkins think, and think,
I sweep the leaves all scattery with my broom.

Who am I?

I am Autumngust. Last one home is a green leaf!

You'll find the rest of the poetry roundup at my juicy little universe, blog home of the lovely Heidi Mordhorst. Stop by there and see what everyone else is posting for Poetry Friday. And have a wonderful Memorial Day Weekend!



Mint tea
is good
with
malted milk balls.

15 comments:

david elzey said...

one element without the others feels very lonely and imbalanced to me. i hope the other voices get their say at some point down the road.

Tabatha said...

Very charming poems, Toby! Your imagery and wordplay are excellent.

Elaine Magliaro said...

Toby,

I love your "element" poems. They're rhythmic and lyrical. I'm with David. I hope the other voices find their way into print one day.

Hazel Mitchell said...

Shame the others did not get published ... but lovely!

Sheri Doyle said...

Oh wow - these are gorgeous! I would love to turn a page to discover the answer "Sprinklerspray"- how refreshing. Hope to hear more of these other voices one day!

Toby Speed said...

I hope so, too, David. Balance is needed!

Thanks, Tabatha. I'm going to see what I can launch from the Fire Voices sketches next.

Elaine, I'd love to get this quartet out there. It feels so unfinished to me, sitting in the file cabinet.

Hazel, thanks! I wonder if a publisher would be interested in doing a new version of Water Voices and take on the rest at the same time.

Sheri, I've always enjoyed sticking words together to come up with new compounds. I think it's one of the best parts of writing poetry.

Ruth said...

Wonderful!

Robyn Hood Black said...

Toby,

That "Morningmist" poem was the very one of yours I read to the fourth graders I was working with this spring, helping to kick off our nature writing! I left the riddle open, and a bright girl guessed "mist" right off. :0)

I do hope these other books materialize someday. LOVE "I sweep the leaves all scattery with my broom" - :0)

Clara Gillow Clark said...

As always, I am astonished by the richness and other-worldness of your poetry. Something of Rilke in that, I think. Here's hoping those poetry collections will find a publisher.

Mary Lee said...

How fun to think of autumngust while the leaves are still practically wet behind their ears with newness. This, too, shall pass, and remembering that, we will appreciate this moment even more!

Toby Speed said...

Thanks, Ruth!

Robyn, that's very cool that you used my poem in class. In my mind's eye I can still see the lake that inspired this poem.

Clara, I think you can guess where I wrote this. :) I need to finish up Fire and Earth and try to stir up some interest.

Thanks, Mary Lee. Autumngust is the first one in the book, so I started with that. Maybe I'll post some of the others on my blog.

Maeve Frazier said...

Wonderful! I really enjoyed reading your poetry and your blog!

Mark J. L. VanDerwater said...

Toby, You beautifully combine gentle sensitivity with daring word acrobatics! I love my copy of WATER VOICES and would adore lining the others beside it on my shelf. Thank you for the malted milk ball recommendation - we need to try that with our mint tea! A.

Toby Speed said...

So glad you stopped by, Maeve. Welcome to my blog. I enjoyed checking out yours, too. Especially loved the post about why you call your blog LolliPop's Cottage. :)

Toby Speed said...

Amy, your description of the two aspects of my poems gives me a smile and warms my heart. :)