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Wednesday, March 2, 2011

Snooping around

What can you learn about someone from a half-eaten tuna sandwich or their radio station pre-sets? Lots.

As someone who is forever rummaging through my characters' refrigerators, glove compartments, pockets and closets, I was intrigued when friend and blogger Alison Stevens reviewed a book all about the subject, Snoop: what your stuff says about you, and interviewed author Sam Gosling. Today I'm participating in Alison's Super Snooper Blogfest with a little scene snipped (or snooped) from my work in progress, Death Over Easy.

Even before she winds up in the middle of murder, amateur sleuth Emma Trace is a collector of details. What she writes down in the notebook that she takes everywhere in her "I Love Libraries" tote, combined with her memories and associations about the people in her town, bring the murderer down. Would you expect anything less from someone who played Harriet the Spy in the library stacks as a child?

You should be able to learn a few things about Emma's employer, Able Editing, from her observations at the beginning of the book.

One of the perks of being a freelancer is that I can work at home. Every time I stop in at Able, I am very glad of this fact. The room is paneled in fake knotty pine à la 1950’s suburbia. To the right of the door, four sunken plaid chairs face each other over a kidney-shaped coffee table. A dusty fake ficus mopes in the corner. To the left of the door is a water cooler and another ficus, this one covered in Christmas lights from last year.

A vomit-colored counter dissects the room from left to right, separating the reception area from the work space. Behind the counter sits a massive oak desk that looks like it’s been gnawed by beavers, and on it is a typewriter that is actually used on a daily basis. Old steel file cabinets line the walls. Every surface, including the floor, is piled high with file folders and open reference books. A large sign on the back wall reads, Is There Life After Death? Trespass Here And Find Out.

Inez Lipschitz, the office manager, was on the phone when I got there. It would be more accurate to say she was in it, as she was wrapped in yards of curly cord that wound around lamps and chair legs, book stacks and coat racks, before making two or three journeys around her waist. She walked back and forth in a small clearing behind the desk, making rapid clicky taps with her pumps. When she saw me, her eyes got round and she held up one finger to indicate she’d be right with me.

I pushed my envelope across the counter and studied a small notice that said Lack of planning on your part does not constitute an emergency on mine.

Where do you like to snoop to find out about your characters?

Stop by Alison's today for more Super Snoopers.



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15 comments:

Alison Stevens said...

This is fabulous! I get the sense that Inez isn't one to stick to current fashion, doesn't get swept up in fads (like computers!). :) And your description clearly indicates Emma's feelings about the decor.

Thanks for participating Toby!

Clara Gillow Clark said...

Toby, What fabulous details that show so much about your characters and setting! I want to read on . . .

Mara Nash said...

Nicely done. I like the ficus with Christmas lights. The whole place sounds just slightly cheesy!

Angela Scott said...

She's far to busy for nonsense like taking down last years Christmas lights--posh. Too much to do, those things don't matter and being a trend setter is the last thing she values. She's feels all right in her own skin and doesn't need that kind of validation. Confident.

Toby Speed said...

Glad you liked it, Alison, Clara, Mara, and Angela. All of you are right about Inez - she's too busy kibitzing (socializing) to worry about much else. As far as Able's decor - cheesy is right!

Mara and Angela, thanks both of you for your first visit to my blog, and for commenting.

Francine Howarth said...

Hi,

Great descriptions, and oh boy did I feel she's happy working in what to others appears to be a time-warp circa 50s-60s. ;)

best
F

Debra Ann Elliott said...

Stopping by from the blogfest. I love your detail.

Toby Speed said...

Francine and Debra, thanks for stopping by! The Able office is in a time-warp, for sure. :)

Michael Di Gesu said...

Great description.

I enjoyed your entry.

Toby Speed said...

Thanks, Michael!

Elizabeth Mueller said...

Cool! Sounds like an office she's in, um, the person is in organized chaos. I love "vomit-colored"! and Able Editing. I take that as a subliminal hint to all writers. Am I right? ;)
♥.•*¨ Elizabeth ¨*•.♥

Donna Hole said...

This guy is stuck in the past :)

Wow, so vividly busy in that place.

.......dhole

Toby Speed said...

Elizabeth, thanks for your comment. I picked the editing business as my protagonist's career, since it's something I'm very familiar with. The name has an old-fashioned sound to it, which is what I was looking for. But I'd say that subliminal hint is there, too!

Donna, thanks for visiting, reading, and liking!

Teralyn Rose Pilgrim said...

First impression: Able is the tackiest person in the world! This environment makes me feel like I know her intimately, even though you told me nothing about her and she hasn't said a word. Bravo!

Toby Speed said...

Thanks for stopping by, and for your kind words, Teralyn. :)