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Friday, September 17, 2010

Skywriting: Poems to Fly (for Poetry Flyday -- er, Friday)

Happy Poetry Friday, landlubbers and skylubbers. I've been reveling in the book pictured at left since it arrived in my mailbox a few days ago. SKYWRITING: POEMS TO FLY, written by J. Patrick Lewis and illustrated by Laszlo Kubinyi, is a treasure trove of words and art about flying devices, from ornithopter to hot air balloon to space shuttle.

With simple, straightforward language that takes a whimsical turn about every four words, Lewis takes us through a history of soaring that most of us haven't witnessed before, all in one place.

Sure, we've all heard of Icarus, the Wright Brothers, and the Concorde. But how many of us know anything at all about the French Equestrian Balloon that actually carried pilots aloft on horseback?

Or the Marquis d'Equevilley's oval Multiplane, resembling a steamboat paddle with seven wings?

Or the bizarre-looking Piasecki V-8P Airgeep, a three-wheeled contraption with all kinds of metal protuberances that the U.S. Army dubbed the "Sky Car?"

Or the eye-popping Minerva balloon, which was designed to keep sixty people aloft for six months in a gondola-like structure with nearly a whole city inside?

Thirteen flying machines and thirteen poems make up the book, with a timeline and endnotes in the back for those who want to know more, more, more.

The clever poems are all structured differently and are all eminently readable. From the poem about the Concorde, which is shaped like the Concorde, to the one about the Lockheed F-117A Nighthawk in which every brief line has the freshest, funnest rhymes --

metal Darth Vader
impersonator
invisible raider,
black jet aviator
and wicked wind-skater

-- nearly every poem is a little gem.

Or consider these words, from the poem about the Ornithopter:

While observers were whooping and clapping,
The pilot was happily snapping
Bird wings into place
For a wild goose chase,
And the plane was repeatedly flapping!

A goose accompanies the poem in the illustration.

And, speaking of illustrations, there is much fun stuff in Kubinyi's illustrations to hunt for and delight in. Notice the Minerva, shown in the cover illustration above. See the tiny row of houses and what looks like a circus tent on the upper rim of the balloon? In the interior illustration, not reproduced above, you can actually see a group of people gathered around the small, secondary balloon -- and a cat walking across the barrel below, reaching out its paw toward a passing bird!

The page about the Bell Rocket Belt -- a kind of jet pack thing -- shows the pilot launching himself beside the Galaxy Diner, surrounded by cars that were popular in 1961.

Each illustration is finely, carefully drawn to reflect the fashions and other indications of the time period when the flying craft flew (or attempted to leave the ground).

I'd have loved to scan in additional illustrations, but the book is not fitting well in my scanner. Nevertheless, find this book in your library or book store, and take it for a ride around the pattern.

Additional reviews of SKYWRITING: POEMS TO FLY can be found here and here.


Elaine Magliaro is flying the Poetry Friday hostess flag today at Wild Rose Reader. Please aviate on over and find a new runway or two to land on today in the poetrysphere. And check out Elaine's terrific "Things to do if you are a..." series of poems while you're there.

9 comments:

Mary Lee said...

You and the sky, be it clouds or things that fly...or flew!! I thought of you this week -- we've had some spectacular skies and I'm back to taking more cloud pictures. There was a giant phoenix cloud flying over us one afternoon at dismissal, but alas, I didn't take my camera out on bus duty!

laurasalas said...

Love this book--thanks for reminding me of some of its best bits!

Clara Gillow Clark said...

You are FlyGirl extraordinaire! Thanks for sharing this wonderful book. I'm definitely requesting it at my library!

Andromeda Jazmon said...

This sounds like a great one! Thanks for the fun review.

jama said...

Happy Poetry Flyday!

Loved this review. The book looks simply wonderful :).

You are my favorite Flygirl.♥

Looking for the Write Words said...

Hi Toby,
Sounds like something to share with my students. Thanks for the review.
~Theresa

Toby Speed said...

Mary Lee, Laura, Clara, Andy, Jama, Theresa - thanks, glad you liked it. Yes, I do seem to enjoy all things UP. The illustrations in this book remind me of an author/illustrator I loved whose books had a touch of the bizarre while appearing to be straightforward. I don't really know how to explain it. I posted about him on Facebook, too, but will have to see if my librarians can figure out who he was. One of the books had a giant potato in a cage. I think the water or something had changed, and it grew very large.

Mary Lee, we've had some wonderful skies here, too. I keep hoping I see a cloud that looks like a "P" for poetry and that I'll have my camera ready when it floats by.

Amy LV said...

Toby, It's such fun to read about your book characters and all of their goings-on. The process of novel writing must be so different, so much looooonger, than poetry. Methinks you are going to miss those guys very much when the book is complete. Thank you for today's review - and for adding a book to my list of books to get and read!
A.

Toby Speed said...

Amy, the process of character revelation is so much fun, more fun than I can describe. A couple of them have a very dry sense of humor, and it just comes out as they speak. Others are nervous, or not very articulate, or other things. They interfere with, thwart, distract, and amuse my main character in ways I couldn't have foreseen. I will miss most of them very much, and may have to let them come to life in a second novel sometime.