I stayed with my dear friend and fellow writer Marileta in her old farmhouse on a hill. We walked and talked, talked and walked, sloshed in mud, drove in the rain, smelled pine trees, looked at stars, and picked baskets of vegetables from her garden. We spent a wonderful writerly afternoon with our mutual friend and comrade-in-words Clara, shopping and talking and reading together (and overdosing on garlic). So much fun.
I'm home now, in my regular home, but it is hard to believe I'm here. For years, while my children were growing up, we spent summers in northeast PA, in a cottage on Bunnell's Pond. Some years we stayed the entire summer; others just a few weeks. My girls learned to swim there, they had library cards, and they took long walks picking berries. Every summer we went to the Wayne County Fair. My picture book Brave Potatoes is even dedicated to the vegetables at the fair!
I wrote most of my picture books in a gazebo overlooking the pond. Here is how our place looked then.
It looks close to that now, but the owners are new.
The girls and I used to go out in paddleboats or rowboats, and in the middle of summer, parts of the pond were covered in lilies. I liked to watch the lilies react to the light and the dark. Sometimes I'd pick one and float it in a bowl of water on our porch, under the porch light. One summer I wrote a poem about the lilies.
Day Lilies, Night Lilies, Night-Light Lilies
by Toby Speed
I
Day lilies break
open on green lily leaves
like white birds hatching.
They cry, upreaching,
catch me, sky.
In between them
float the bees,
filling up on light lily nectar
from their slowly unfolding wings.
Night lilies huddle
buttoned tight and battened up
in buds that point
ready to launch,
pale rockets locked on pads.
Night-light lilies in a bowl
revolve like petaled moons
in their own small sky
or ballerinas who cannot find
the wings.
II
Floating over the lake
like sunny rows of teacups,
day lilies say as they're serving,
drink me and wake.
Night lilies drink their own tea privately
and wait for a kiss from a frog.
Night-light lilies in the porch light
in a bowl
have forgotten which is up and which is down.
No memory of nectar or of bees.
No memory of teatime, or frogs,
or bright awakenings,
and later, when their petals fall,
no memory of wings.
Copyright © Toby Speed 2010. All rights reserved.
Kate has the Poetry Friday roundup this week at Book Aunt. Enjoy the weekend, everyone.

17 comments:
Toby, what a touching poem. I love lilies--they are my favorite flower.
I am, sadly, without poetry today, so I'm glad I got to read yours. I hope your novel is approaching completion! :)
Thanks for your comment, Alison. I am at 72K words now and still working to reach the words "The End." Hope the summer's been a good one for you and your family. :)
Such a gorgeous poem, Toby!!!
Your story about your home near the pond and the lovely poem added a bright light to my grey morning.
I placed this blog post on my Facebook for my friends to enjoy.
Thank you!
Hi Toby! I esp. like "in buds that point
ready to launch,
pale rockets locked on pads" and the last line of your poem.
Have a great weekend!
Toby, what a beautiful poem. And I also loved reading some about the background. One of my favorite craft books is Richard Hugo's The Triggering Town. Places bring us so much.
There was a huge rain storm where we're vacationing in Maine two days ago, and on a bike ride, my husband noted how beautifully the water lilies were submerged in a pond, unable to keep up with all the extra water.
Have a great weekend!
Nina, thank you, and I love your fly-eating frog.
Mary, that is so nice of you to share my lilies on Facebook. Glad you stopped by.
Hi Tabatha. Metaphors about flight always seem to occur to me. You have a great weekend, too.
Jeannine, your praise means a lot to me. :) I'll go check out the book you mentioned.
Toby,
That's a really lovely poem. It sounds like you have had some idyllic summer vacations.
I recently spent a week up on Westport Island in Maine. I hated to return home!
Toby - I liked your thorough "examination" of lilies! Very nice and visual.
BJ Lee
Elaine, it was so hard to come back to traffic and noise after only three days. I should be used to this by now!
Thanks, BJ. I always feel lucky when I come across an idea that will play out this way.
Dear friend, I love your Day Lilies, Night Lilies, Night-Light Lilies poem. That last line is so haunting and melancholy that it made me choke up. It could be death or in light of your post, homesickness. It was wonderful to see you back home again.
What a lovely poem! And the cottage on the pond is beautiful. Of course I was absolutely taken with the "sunny rows of teacups." :)
Clara, I think you're right. Those lilies in the bowl made me sad, having been pulled out of their natural habitat. I'm thinking a lot about home this week.
Jama, the whole property was beautiful. The owners lived in the big house in the middle, while I always stayed in the cottage that's peeking out from under the trees to the right. There is also a waterfall to the right that you can't see in this picture. Thanks for your comment!
What a beautiful poem! And the photo? Oh my goodness, how beautiful. Those summer sound dreamy.
My good friend lives near there and her Christmas card photos are always so pretty.
It's so nice that you and your writer friends had a relaxing getaway!
Julie, thank you! Those summers were dreamy, and the whole area seems not to have changed very much over time. It's refreshing to get back to places that resonate with us, don't you agree?
Toby, What a lovely poem. I love all of it, but especially the stanza that begins Night lilies huddle/buttoned tight and battened up. Your memories from summers past and this week's visit with friends are a reminder of what we hold near and dear in our hearts.
~Theresa
Thanks, Theresa. This poem always brings back the feelings, scents and scenes of those summers and reinforces the friendships that have endured over time.
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